Concept

Goal

You might say: scene goal

What the viewpoint character wants in this scene. It must be specific and clear: get the list to security.

What it does

Gives the scene a direction and a test of success.

Ask

What exactly does she want in the next ten pages?

Trouble

A vague wish, such as “she wants to feel safe”.

What to look for

1. A viewpoint character pursuing a clear task
2. A visible test of success

Sources

1. Randy Ingermanson, “Writing The Perfect Scene”, Large-Scale Structure of a Scene; Motivation-Reaction UnitsA Scene has the following three-part pattern: Goal Conflict Disaster

Use it on your project

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