Concept

Significant detail

You might say: concrete detail, telling detail

A concrete detail appeals to the senses. Burroway: it becomes significant when it also suggests an idea or a judgement.

What it does

Lets readers infer the meaning themselves, so it sticks.

Ask

What one detail shows what this room, or this person, is really like?

Trouble

Lists of generic details: “a nice room with a table and chairs”.

What to look for

1. A concrete detail that appeals to the senses
2. A detail suggesting an idea or judgement
3. One telling detail for a room or person

Sources

1. Janet Burroway, Significant Detail, pp. 1–2 of handout; excerpt from Writing FictionA detail is concrete if it appeals to one of the five senses; it is significant if it also conveys an idea or a judgment or both

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