Part

Revised draft

You might say: second draft

The draft after a revision pass: leaner, and closer to the story you meant to tell.

What it does

Feeds the next round of revision, or goes on to editing.

Ask

Is it ready for an editor, or does it need another round?

Trouble

The problems readers flagged are still there.

Sources

1. Stephen King, The Art of Fiction No. 189, revision formula passageWhen you return to a novel after that amount of time, it seems almost as if a different person wrote it.

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